初中英语作文,总考不好,Onesunnyafternoon,wehadaPElesson.Wegatheredontheplayground.Theteachertoldusthatwewouldlearnthelongjump.Ibegantofeelnervousbeacasuelwasafraidoffalling.Firstteachershowedushowtojump

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初中英语作文,总考不好,

Onesunnyafternoon,wehadaPElesson.Wegatheredontheplayground.Theteachertoldusthatwewouldlearnthelongjump.Ibegantofeelnervousbeacasuelwasafraidoffalling.Firstteachershowedushowtojumpbetterandlonger.Thenwewereaskedtobeready.Afteramoment,itturnedtome.llookedatthewayandtriedmyfirsttime.Unfortunately,lfailedandfelldown.Myfriendandtheteacherencouragedme.lfeltpowerfulagain,andtriedagain.Atlast,ljumpedover3meters!lwassohappythatlcouldn'tsayaword.Yes,lsucceeded!Asthesayinggoes,'Practisemakestheperfect!'

黄大海回答：

　　.楼上的那个完全是改错了==人家时态好好的.

　　第二行,beacasue,应该是because

　　第三行,对的,first改firstly+“,”会比较好；然后应该jumpbetterandfarther,不是longer.

　　wewereaskedtobeready==.这里有一个准备的过程,beready十分生硬.改getready.

　　!后面,itwasmyturn.轮到我了.没有itturnedtome这种说法.

　　.后面一句.Ilookedatthepathway(更具象一点,通路而不要泛指“路”)andhadmyfirsttry.

　　Practicemakesperfect.没有the

　　然后初中作文的话这样改就可以了,要求没必要更高了.

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