父亲去世之后
【内容提示】
某一天，有人告诉你说你家里出了大事。你赶回家一看是自己的一位亲人去世了。你悲痛万分，有几天沉浸在悲伤之中。你办完丧事返校后，同学们都来向你致哀，并用各种方法安慰你，有的同学还拿出钱来资助你的学习生活费，你十分感激。
【作文示范】
Aftr Fathr＇s Dath
Novmbr 4, 1996 was a day I shall nvr forgt.
At 9 o＇clock that night, I was told that somthing srious had happnd in my family. I hurrid hom from school. Whn I saw many of my fathr＇s fllow workrs in his bdroom, I knw th worst thing had happnd . I pushd my way into th room and saw Fathr lying in bd , covrd with a whit sht①. I rushd to him, liftd th whit sht with trmbling hands, and caught sight of his pal fac with his ys tightly closd. In dspair I shook his shouldrs, crying, “Dad! Dad! ” But his mouth nvr opnd. Tars bgan running down my chks.
During th following two days I was dp in sorrow. Whn I was arranging Fathr＇s funral②, many classmats and frinds cam to comfort③ Mothr and m.
On th day I rturnd to school, my classmats again trid to comfort m . Whn I opnd my dsk , I found in it a lot of lttrs and nots, in which wr many comforting and ncouraging words. I was so movd that I coudn＇t kp my tars. Thn a tachr told m that my classmats had contributd④ a larg amount of mony to hlp m pay living and school xpnss⑤. I was vry thankful to thm and tars again filld my ys . I covrd my fac with my hands though I was a big boy. I could find no words to xprss my flings at that momnt. Thir lov for m gav m much courag. I was proud of such a warmhartd⑥ class.
（选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年第7期）
【词语解释】
①sht [Mi:t] n．被单
②funral [＇fju:n+r+l] n．丧葬；葬礼
③comfort [＇k)mf+t] v．安慰
④contribut [k+n＇tribju(:)t] v．捐献
⑤xpns [ik＇spns] n．花费
⑥warmhartd [＇w&:m＇ha:tid] a．富于同情心的
【写法指要】
本文写得真实、清楚，表达了三种感情：悲痛之情，友爱之情和感激之情。悲痛之情和感激之情是通过两种眼泪表达的：悲痛的眼泪夺眶而出，泪如泉涌（crying，bgan running down）；感激的眼泪情不自禁“couldn＇tkp back my tars, tars again filld my ys”。友爱之情的表达主要是通过重复动词“comfort”，“contribut”和分词“comforting”，“ncouraging”实现的。最后，作者为有这样富于同情心的班集体而骄傲，并要化悲痛为力量，表达对同学、老师们关怀的谢意。
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