求人给这篇英语四级作文评分~
2010年12月英语四级作文
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该.
字数要求150
HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
Fewdaysago,ireadthenewspaperandfoundaessaythatsaysthechildrennowadaysarebecomingmoreandmoredependent,thereasonforthatmaybealargepartofparentsdoalmosteverythingfortheirchildren,includingearing,eating,movingandsoon.
Everythinghasitstwosides,sodoesthisthing.Ontheonehand,withthehelpoftheirparents,childrencandoeverythingsuccessfullyandhappily.Thiscanaddtheirconfidence.Ontheotherhand,thesethingswouldwastetheirparents'time,andwithtimegoon,childrencandonothingbythemselves.
Sotheparentsshouldhelptheirchildrentobeindependent.Firstly,theycantrynottodoeverythingfortheirchildren.Secondly,theyshouldalsohavetheirowntimetowork,andlettheirchildrentodotheirownthingbythemselves.Thelastbutnottheleast,parentscangivetheirchildrenmorehomeworktodo.
Allinall,icanbelievechildrenwillbeindependentfinallywiththethingsmentionedabove.
(字体很一般)
能得80分吗,有什么可以快速提分的方法吗?
我想知道我到底能得多少分~
冯元琨回答:
恕我直言我估计及格分够呛.如果不是你敲字的失误的话首段就问题多多aessay;includingearing,eating,moving;且全句缺连词.Everythinghasitstwosides,sodoesthisthing.这样的句子比较没含金量.Thisca...