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求人给这篇英语四级作文评分~2010年12月英语四级作文1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该.字数要求150HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?HowShouldParentsHelpChildrento

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求人给这篇英语四级作文评分~

2010年12月英语四级作文

1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切

2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该.

字数要求150

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?

Fewdaysago,ireadthenewspaperandfoundaessaythatsaysthechildrennowadaysarebecomingmoreandmoredependent,thereasonforthatmaybealargepartofparentsdoalmosteverythingfortheirchildren,includingearing,eating,movingandsoon.

Everythinghasitstwosides,sodoesthisthing.Ontheonehand,withthehelpoftheirparents,childrencandoeverythingsuccessfullyandhappily.Thiscanaddtheirconfidence.Ontheotherhand,thesethingswouldwastetheirparents'time,andwithtimegoon,childrencandonothingbythemselves.

Sotheparentsshouldhelptheirchildrentobeindependent.Firstly,theycantrynottodoeverythingfortheirchildren.Secondly,theyshouldalsohavetheirowntimetowork,andlettheirchildrentodotheirownthingbythemselves.Thelastbutnottheleast,parentscangivetheirchildrenmorehomeworktodo.

Allinall,icanbelievechildrenwillbeindependentfinallywiththethingsmentionedabove.

(字体很一般)

能得80分吗,有什么可以快速提分的方法吗?

我想知道我到底能得多少分~

冯元琨回答:

  恕我直言我估计及格分够呛.如果不是你敲字的失误的话首段就问题多多aessay;includingearing,eating,moving;且全句缺连词.Everythinghasitstwosides,sodoesthisthing.这样的句子比较没含金量.Thisca...

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