一篇英语作文,非常感谢你.
MyValuablePresent
LastSunday,Ihadmybirthday.IreceivedaspecialpresentfrommyDad.Itwasadictionary.Itwasthickandcolourful.Iwasamazedtoseethethingandopeneditonmyown.Onthefirstpage,Isawasentence:Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.Idecidedtolookupwordsinitandlearneditwithmyheart.IdobelieveifItriedmybesttolearnEnglish,Iwillsucceed.Soit'savaluablepresentinmymind.
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MyValuablePresentLastSunday,Ihadmybirthday.Ireceivedaspecialpresentwhichwasboughtby(加上了定于从句)myDad.Openingthepresent,Iwasamamzed(用了非谓,在句中很提分).(要注意语序,先打开,才...