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FashionPursuitinColleges
Nowadays,thereisatrendwhichisaundeniablefactonthecampusthat,moreandmorestudentsarepursuitingfashion.Wearingcharacteristicclothesisgettingprevailingamongtheyouth.Otherfashionalthingssuchashair-dyeing,ringsarealsocanbeseen.
Manypeopleholdthepointsthatpursuitingfashiondoesnoharmtothereyoungmen.Theydohavetheflexiblechoicesonwhattheywearorhowtheybehave.Pursuitingfashioncanalsobelookedasapioneeringspiritwhichshowstheenergyandtheopen-mindthoughtsoftheyouth.
Butonthecontrary,therearealsosomepeoplehavetheoppositeideathat,pursuitingfashioniswastingtime.Theythinkthatthecollegesstudentsshouldputthestudyandcoursesonthetopoftheiragenda.Studyinghardistheonlyimperativeforthestudentandpoureffortsintothesefashionalthingsismeaninglessandworthless.
AsfarasIconcerned,itismeaninglesstocompetewithotherpeopleforpursuitingfashion.Butdressingyourselfpropertyisalsonecessarybecauseitdoesmakeyoucharming.
陈永翾回答:
1,studentsarepursuitingfashion,pursuit是名词,这个因该用动词pursuing的,一下有这问题的都应该改正2,poureffortsintothesefashionalthingsismeaninglessandworthless.中的pour应该改成pouring较为合...